经常有学生跟我诉苦，“老师我上次考了5.5分真的很冤，我真的是每个（Part 2）题卡都准备了...考生是不是给我压分了？”然后看了看他们的所谓“准备的答案”，感觉*也不容易啊...

 

本文中北京朗阁老师将为大家讲讲有关雅思口语准备原创答案为何低分？下面是一篇学生原创的Part 2答案，大家一起感受一下：

 

 

Describe a success your friend has achieved.

You should say:

Who your friend is

What the success was

What he or she did

How you felt about the success

 

Tom is my friend who is also a oversea student. I have been knowing he since I started my undergraduate education. Tom has a dream of studying abroad since he was a child. It was about 10 years a when he was planning to study aboard after graduating from high school. At that time, there’s this growing tendency among high school graduates to embark on a study abroad program. But when he told his parents that he wanted to study aboard his parents were really worried about he and told he that being in a new place myself could be overwhelming sometimes. When he listened to his mother’s advice, he temporarily gave up ing abroad.

 

I told him when he was a college student, “you should believe study aboard is a od opportunity for you to see the world and to experience different styles education. Besides, you can improve your language skills, And you are a college student now. You have the ability to overcome any difficulties.” Later he tried to apply for a foreign school without a doubt, he successfully went to the Australia. And he received a full scholarship.

 

I am proud of what he has managed to pull off. As for how I felt about it, first, I am delighted that my advice worked on him and I managed to make him reach his potential. Second, his outstanding results have made me proud and I feel thrilled that I could be of his friend.

 

北京朗阁老师在这里向提醒：就算是口语普通的同学都可以看出，上面的这个Part 2答案里面有无数的语法错误和中式表达，更别提整体思路和题目不match，逻辑性也欠缺...如果学生原创的答案都是这个standard的，就算准备了所有的题卡又有什么用呢？

 

要让自己准备的“原创答案”work，一定要make sure自己的答案是可以拿到的，所以，自己原创完以后，一定要有老师给修改！老师改完后*这篇答案是可用的，学生的原创答案才算work啊，这样才没有“白”准备啊！